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Aug 20, 2006 09:22

/Maybe not with words
Maybe not with a look
But with your mind/

Eve set her song
onto the ocean
for he,
for her
to find

there were
so many
who shared
her heart's blood,
the bone
and brine
of her

her slice
of god
folded
into a flower
marked
mortal

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flyingshaman August 20 2006, 14:02:56 UTC
immortal spirit
immortal love
passing through generations
hearts bound through whirling time
always
always
together

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greensidhe August 20 2006, 22:30:15 UTC
love that stretches
far beyond
time
and Saturn's gnarled fingers

love that
trancends the tides,
the rise
and fall
of man

love that finds
its truth
in truth itself,
rooted
in the
smile
of god
herself..

*hugs*

ps: Thank you for reminding me
of how wonderful I am. It meant more than I can express.
<3

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flyingshaman August 21 2006, 02:23:41 UTC
"love that finds
its truth
in truth itself,
rooted
in the
smile
of god
herself.."

very, very beautiful, especially the last three lines.

You are always welcome to my praise of you.
I would send telegrams to you every couple of days
just to tell you how the thought of you
brightens up every day,
how I can see you talking with the squirrels,
tucking my hair behind my ear..

You are a glorious miracle
remember that.

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forestwhisperer August 21 2006, 02:03:47 UTC
the last stanza really moved me--made me feel more alive.

thank you

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