'the legion of everything does keep me awake'

[greensilkchai]

for fun. though when it's five a.m. and these things come a-knocking at my skull, it's less fun

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[fyrespritetryst]

miss you

[nachtwyrm]

The muse is fickle and cares not for our notions of when is an appropriate time to be inspired. I am fortunate that the stories i write while waiting to sleep come to me at a much more reasonable hour.

I attempted to look up a couple of words that i am unfamiliar with in your poem and was gloriously unsuccessful (specifically neel'ta'cales and yir fasa).
Are these your constructions? do they have a specific meaning you are willing to share?

I did find the words yir and fasa in a language called Ron, but i couldn't gather their meaning in that language, and am not sure if that is the source for your use of the words anyway.

With respect to the poem, i like the imagery of the descriptions a great deal but hope that you are able to find some sleep these next few nights.

'twas brillig, and the slithy toves...

[greensilkchai]

anything in the poem you don't understand is probably stuff i made up. i like words, i like sounds, i like making sounds into words.