Punishment essay for the sitter
My sitter http://sitter-on-duty.livejournal.com/ came over recently to look after me for the evening and she became aware that -- like most men and unlike most women -- I not only have no interest in knowing the names of all my parts, I am somewhat revulsed by the whole thing. And then I
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While this is NOT AT ALL in essay form, it's clear you at least did sufficient research. I will accept this.
I thought you knew what proper essay form was, but apparently this is not the case. You can look up essay formats on the internet, but generally they are as follows;
Title
Opening paragraph
3-5 body (descriptive/supportive) paragraphs
Conclusion
Following a proper format will turn the list above into an actual essay.
I don't require that it be re-done at this time, but future papers that are not submitted in proper essay form will not be accepted. You did a very good job finding the information, only the presentation is lacking.
So what do you know that you didn't know before finding this information? I hope you didn't just copy and paste; there will be a test!
Love,
Ma'am
xo
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It was not cut and paste -- no. As for learnings, I had no idea what a vas deferins was, and had never even heard of a frenulum!
Thanks for accepting my work, Ma'am. I appreciate not having to work on it further.
XOXO
-boy
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