Three brides and a groom for four brothers (2/?)

[aidill]

Title: Four brides Three brides and a groom for four brothers (2/?)
Pairing: Ohmiya. Sho, Aiba and Jun will be paired with OC due to plot needs.
Summary: Based on the classic movie 'Seven brides for seven brothers' ... only a bit different  ^______~
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The plot is mine. Revised and completed byzazasukie 
Genre: AU
Words count: 918
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Comments

[shadow_kick]

Hello! It has been a while since we've talked :D How's it going, you guys?

This new story looks really promising. Looking forward to see how it'll play out. <3
There are a few mistakes here and there though.

Thank you for sharing!

[aidill]

Hello! Yeah, it has been a while, but I finally have a new story to post! \(^o^)/ (zazasukie is still on hiatus)

I'm glad you find the plot promising (though it's not as surprising as others because it's based in a well-known movie -__-U)

Could you please point me those mistakes out? I don't have a beta-reader, so any help is welcome! ^____^

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[shadow_kick]

:D Yay!

Ahahaha, if it's any consolation, I've never heard of the movie. >.<

Yepp, I'll be glad to help. Stuff like "her" when it's supposed to be "his". & grammatical errors, e.g "pretty in it" instead of "pretty with it". & it's "triumphant" not "triumphal". And so on.

<3

[shadow_kick]

Sorry! triumphal is okay. >.< It's just that it's archaic so I got confused for a moment. My bad. D:

[trantktam826]

lol poor Nino. I kinda expected this, but didn't think you would dress him in pink :))
those 3, are they that desprate for love =)) I'm volunteered to be kidnap, all they have to do is ask and I would gladly surrender XD
Looking forward to next Friday~

[aidill]

Hahaha! They can kidnap me too! Especially if I can stay the whole winter with them in the same little cabin! *wriggling her eyebrows like Groucho*

Thank you for your comment!

[aidill]

Argh, misspelled. I meant wiggling :/

[himitsu_17]

Thank you so much ♥
Love you XD

"When a voice, deathly serious, chilled him to the bones." --> LOVE IT ! I LOVE ANGRY!OHNO ♥ I really want to know what will happen *-*

THANK YOU SO MUCH !! ♥
I'm so happy !! ♥

[aidill]

^________________^

I'm so happy you like how the fic is developing!

What will happen next chapter? How are they going to react when they'll discover who the fourth 'bride' is? :3
Please look forward it! ^___^

Thanks for following this series!

[londyna]

oh now Ohno is angry eheheh
I'm really looking forward for the next chapter... It's really interesting :D
thanks for sharing ^^

[aidill]

I'd be as angry as him if I were in the same situation! XD How is he going to sort out the situation his brothers have created? Dun dun duuuun!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[satoshi258]

angry ohno remind me of sexy naruse san!!! i wonder if nino will continue to parade as a girl in the next few chapters just to annoy his captors or reveal his gender soon? cant wait!! this story is really interesting! =)

[aidill]

Hahaha! I don't think he can parade as a girl for too long but you'll have to wait for next chapters to know how it develops! ^____~

I'm happy you enjoy this series, thanks for your comment!