a seal upon your heart

Jul 20, 2011 14:38

Somewhere, somewhere in the wide world, there must be a person with my name tattooed upon their heart. And that heart beats the triplicate rhythm of my name, a strange staccato, one-two-three one-two-three one-two-three ( Read more... )

introspection, emptiness

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animegoil July 20 2011, 18:04:19 UTC
Loved the message and the mood ♥ Lovely descriptions.

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grey_damaskena July 20 2011, 23:30:33 UTC
I thank you. :-D I am embarrassingly thrilled and complimented to have received your comment, actually.

My mind comes out with strange stuff when I'm stressed, that's my best (only) explanation for this.

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animegoil July 21 2011, 02:39:43 UTC
Haha, it's actually really, really neat. I'm kind of jealous because it's short but self-contained, something which is very hard for me. It's sometimes hard to come up with something other than a story, which could span chapters and chapters, so it's nice to see a short, intense bit of meaningful and well-written piece of writing ♥

(and that's actually closer to what I wanted to say when I first read it, but you know how it is when you read something and have no idea how to phrase what you felt or thought about it XD)

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grey_damaskena August 1 2011, 14:17:36 UTC
(All the time, rather...)

Heh. When I write stories-- ye gods, stories are an entirely different thing. I don't seem to get small ideas that can be covered in a paragraph, or three, or six, or a dozen. They're usually massive epics that I can't hope to do justice to. Especially since I write incredibly slowly. @_@

So possibly we're in the same boat, with the exception of the "doing justice" part. ;-)

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giddymorose July 20 2011, 23:29:04 UTC
You have a wonderful way of using imagery.

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grey_damaskena August 1 2011, 14:18:08 UTC
You have a wonderful way of being nice to me. :-) I appreciate your kindness, rather.

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lucifermourning July 21 2011, 11:35:45 UTC
lovely.

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