Comments | grey_of_heart: v2.0 - this is a dark ride

grey_of_heart

v2.0 - this is a dark ride

Apr 23, 2010 10:02

( cut for sort-of backstory. those who remember Gabe from before *may* be enlightened (no guarantee), but those who don't will most certainly be confused. in any case, it's skippable. )

v2.0, open, action, welcome back, voice, narrative

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bustydefense April 23 2010, 22:14:14 UTC

As you can see, nothing's changed much.

grey_of_heart April 23 2010, 22:57:35 UTC

[The screaming ebbs off until the source seems to run out of steam. He still sounds terrified.]

not real, not real...

bustydefense April 24 2010, 05:29:12 UTC

[She sits down next to him and waits]

grey_of_heart April 24 2010, 05:42:22 UTC

[Gabriel hugs himself tight, not looking at her. He's staring at the grass, the deep green and the blades. Like he could fall into it and drown.]

's not real... told me it wasn't real...

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serverofshota April 23 2010, 23:35:25 UTC

[And, in the park, look who is standing over you in shock.]

... Gabriel?

grey_of_heart April 24 2010, 00:31:27 UTC

[He shudders and sighs, hugging himself.]

Don't hurt me.

serverofshota April 24 2010, 00:32:49 UTC

...

[Gets down on one knee.]

grey_of_heart April 24 2010, 00:44:48 UTC

[The man, Gabriel, is quivering.]

You're...

[The young man looks familiar, and he sifts through shards of memory.]

... you're okay.

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Phone ahoge_goddess April 24 2010, 01:57:37 UTC

Calm yourself

Re: Phone grey_of_heart April 24 2010, 04:44:55 UTC

[The scream tapers off to a thin wail.]

[breathing]

Helfen Sie mir...

Re: Phone ahoge_goddess April 25 2010, 01:31:23 UTC

...do you recognize this place?

Re: Phone grey_of_heart April 25 2010, 01:47:49 UTC

[more breathing]

...

y-yes

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deflowers April 24 2010, 07:31:17 UTC

G...Gabriel...

grey_of_heart April 24 2010, 17:23:25 UTC

[Still screaming, fingers digging into the back of his neck, this isn't real none of it is real he can hear himself why]

deflowers April 25 2010, 03:12:28 UTC

[She wants to approach him, but she's still reeling with the shock.] H-hold on! Snap the fuck out of it!

grey_of_heart April 25 2010, 03:32:23 UTC

[the screaming subsides to a low, constant mumbling]

mein Gott im Himmel, geheiligt werde dein Name...

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no_mountains April 24 2010, 15:02:38 UTC

WOULD YOU JUST STOP SCREAMING?!

grey_of_heart April 24 2010, 17:23:41 UTC

[Apparently not.]

no_mountains April 24 2010, 17:26:32 UTC

[Throwing a bottle at you]

grey_of_heart April 24 2010, 17:31:26 UTC

[Pain. That wakes him up.]

Go the fuck away!

[More fear than anger]

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