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[greyhill]

She said the last bye, to her love on the wharf

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that's deep

[focused_05]

Man that's cool you totally blended nature with someone. It tells a story in very few words. It gives a very colorful picture, good job.

[greyhill]

I am glad you liked it. I also ready your poems..and even though i don't comment very much..i like them very much

[focused_05]

There is a boat show on the 18th at my work and I was wondering if you could come. I'm giving this same message to everybody, so I hope to have alot of people there. It's at Silshole Marina, Dock J, by Golden Gardens

Peace Out
~Joe

[turtlekisses]

I liked that.

If you feel that you write better in spanish, then perhaps you should write in it instead and make us stupid americans figure it out for ourselves :)

[greyhill]

haha....yup..i might try that sometime....*kiss*