This marks the end of the prologue.
Now, chapter one of the real story may begin.
[ooc: This is a dream that Asma has in her own world. About half of it is action that Actually Happened. Warning: a lot of this may be regarded as seriously messed up. Also, plotworthiness ahoy!
Was going to post this when I got back from vacation, but I figure I should just get it over with. Timewarps ( Read more... )
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The "her mother" thing is supposed to be like that. I think I didn't use any italics in the dreamstate because it's not really supposed to be any conscious thinking, just kind of impulses. Except for the whole carpet bit, but that was the only time and I feel like I should go back and correct it.
Also, you're right about the drops thing and I'll go back and fix this. OKAY, I WROTE THIS AT 4:30 AM, I MAY HAVE FIZZED UP ON A FEW THINGS.
I tried to emphasize the not-so-goodness of the Rocmother, so I hope the smiling bit (CREEPY STALKER SMILE IS CREEPY) kind of dragged that over. She's not a nice person, gaiz! Stay away! And if you must approach, bring lots of sharp objects!
(Edward Sparklepire doesn't have nightmares. He doesn't sleep. ALSO IF HE DID SLEEP HE WOULD BE TOO PERFECT TO HAVE NIGHTMARES.)
"Keep it going" fffssshhh I intend to, just as soon as her coming back date rolls around. Which is... August 2nd?...
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