i quit every game i play

[greysgurl]

Title: i quit every game i play
Pairing: Jesse/Rachel
Summary: It was a moment out of one of those Meg Ryan movies that she really used to love, where girl and guy meet again  after ten years and they fall in love again. Jesse sees her again in a chance meeting in an audition - what follows are a series of moments documenting the way friendship

Comments

[manueluv]

Good fic.:)
I like how you develop their relationship. It's sort of sweet but also realistic--there are not always rainbow and sunshine. Both Jesse and Rachel become mature but deep down they are still the same.
And, You really capture the subtlety of that moment when Rachel reacts to the mentioning of Shelby and Lima. Also, I adore the one lines, Jesse's monologues, you drop between every long passage.

Thank you for writing this.

[greysgurl]

Thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[luna172004]

that is so awesome! Perfect StBerry story, full of emotions and so fruthful and in-chracters. We all must admit that in this season there will be kind of the end of stberry but I trully believe that your fic is their future <3

PS gonna reread it so many times, I bet)

[unseensorrows]

i love this!
such a popular jesse/rachel plot but i liked that it took more than a few words to develop. i really liked the interaction. <3