we seem to never end

[greysgurl]

Title: we seem to never end
Author: greysgurl 
Pairing: Jesse/Rachel
Rating: PG13
Word Count:  4,200
Summary: "I have a box you know,'" she uttered quietly, "A box of things that used to be ours..." One night, a bottle of red wine and a box of memories was all they needed to know.

Comments

[cut_thestring]

Oh, this is so bittersweet. But I love it. It's written really beautifully (: ♥ I love how you wove the memories with the box of, well, memories. Really well done.

And a random side note, I'm not sure if you listen to them, but I happened to be listening to the band Phoenix while reading, and that sounded very fitting. Just to let you know. :P

[persephone_20]

Oh. God.

This was amazing, from first to very last word. And so heartbreaking! I don't usually read future fic but this... was perfect.

The only thing was that I found it really hard to read the lighter color of your italics :/

[ms_bnda]

beautiful.
extremely sad, but beautiful none the less..
UGGH!! i knew the whole time that it'd end up like that but i was still wishing the entire time...
oh, well. i'll just continue to be depressed by this. lol. great work.

[unseensorrows]

oh my gosh. i'm crying. like seriously bawling!
beautiful and so sad! <3

[folughee]

Keep posting stuff like this i really like it