Hello Dear

Dec 13, 2004 22:23

Hello dear,
What's your name?
Who do you fear,
What's your claim to fame?

Are you alone,
Or with a group?
Are you a clone?
Tell me the scoop.

Don't tell a lie.
Was it no good?
Did you get a high,
Right where you stood?

Well, good-bye dear,
It was good fun.
I know what you fear.
I'm glad that we're done.

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aki_san December 16 2004, 02:28:49 UTC
I really like this one, Steven. It's got good rhyme and I think the ideas in the lines flow well from one to the next. You should post more. :pokes you with the writin' stick:

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I agree emo_wicca December 16 2004, 22:08:14 UTC
more, I tell you MORE!!!!!

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