Done With You fic, part 2

[griva_x]

Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay-e, here it goes, to my lovely cohort of friends and dirty-minded conspirators. :) JUST CLICK the cut already AND ENJOY!

Done With Youpart 2

Comments

[warpedsexuality]

Hey there, I'm back! Happy to find your story waiting for me

[griva_x]

Hello Kris! Missed our *long and meaningful* conversations. /grins/

Never be ashamed to tell me what *nearly made you come on the spot*, because I *know* such moments in a fic are priceless and rare, and acknowledging the fact you pay me a great compliment. :)

If to be totally objective, I might agree with your note on what *could* come out of Dean's mouth and what could not under the circumstances of the fic, but consider it *my* kink to make Dean say smthg like that. :) Maybe if I wrote it less grammatically correct, you'd accept it? Heh.

So thank you. :) Your pleasure is my pleasure.

And will you be able to beta sequel to Spawn? It will be ca 14 pages long, ready by the end of this week, or so I hope.

[warpedsexuality]

Now that I'm back you won't ever fear not getting long enough feedback, eh? :P

It's good that you take my crudeness as a compliment cus that's exactly what it is.

consider it *my* kink to make Dean say smthg like that. :)
That is the argument to end all argumentation. :) Revelling in one's kinks is fanfic's raison d'être.

It would be my pleasure to beta the sequel to Spawn!! Friday to Sunday of this week I am once again away without Internet access, but I should have some time on my hands come Monday. So if we're lucky, I'll be able to finish it during the course of next week.

[griva_x]

There is never enough long feedback, so fear not, I'll never ask you to use less words and be more curt. :)

The flight of my fantasy is unstoppable. Tonite I was visited by a crazy idea that to properly wrap up Spawn verse, I have to write the third part, which will be pretty pretty dark. I have the basic plot in my head and the ending too, but it needs to be put on paper. Meanwhile, I will keep on polishing the 2nd part (still no title). So hopefully I will send it to you by next Monday for the 1st beta-read.

[andrea_deer]

Sorry for the late comment, but it took me awhile to catch up on reading... Anyway. As I believe I told you when you first told me about this project, it's not exactly my type of thing. At least I think so, 'cause I read some brutal stuff and enjoyed it, but it was really rare case and most of the time there was some fluff thre in anyway ;)
Still, I read and like always I have to admire the way you shown the characters, even if you know, the story didn't exactly click with me.

And - for the record - I love the way you write the smart-ass Dean. *loves Dean*

[griva_x]

Hey there! :)
Circumstances in what we place our characters are, imho, secondary to how the characters behave in these circumstances. I enjoyed a little my kink and managed to wrap up the story quite well, iMHO, and even though it was not everybody's kick, all fb I received stated it was worth a read.

So, im happy about the closure. :)
Hopefully next D&S fic will deliver the right dose of angst for you.

[ib_ratstruck]

Poor dean! I'm clueless as to what led up to this 'scene', but i was totally in dean's corner in this story. i was really liking alex as a bad-ass head of security right up until he cut dean. that was just so ooc to me I just refuse to accept it.

Must be a clone. *vbg*

[griva_x]

Heh heh, could be a clone. :)

I know cutting and blood play is not everybody's kink (and it's not mine, don't see Dean or Alex to be such type), but some of my f-listies wanted me to explore this dark corner, and I did. :) I must say I enjoyed a LOT writing the bad ass chief of security aka Alex (before the blood-letting) because this is very IN character for me. That could be same Alex from SWSS, but *at work*, w/o having turned his nice sidwe to Dean.

Anyway, thank you for reading. I hope you read both parts, or just part 1???

[ib_ratstruck]

Oh I read both parts.

And alas, I must return to work tomorrow, so my catching up on fic reading will slow down again. I'm going to miss it. I've enjoyed the past two weeks of reading.

[alterai]

Ohhhh my gosh. This was...the hottest thing since sliced bread, imo =D

Reading through some of the comments above, I'll have to agree that it was a bit OOC in some parts of the plot for both of these characters, but it was no less enjoyable to read! Actually, they had to be OOC because otherwise this fic would not have worked, especially since it's only two parts (*cough* sequel? *cough*). Still, I loved the potrayal of Krycke's dark side and Dean's vulnerablity, his need for someone to control him (he would never admit this, of course), and I can definitely see Dean cutting himself in the past because all the pain and guilt had to find an outlet somewhere.

And now my brain's going to spawn a hundred different scenarios for what Alex plans to do with his new...'pet'. Bwahahaha xD

Looks like I'm going to have to go read SWSS now.

[griva_x]

OMG, it is so cool to still receive fb for this story. And you got all my points right, esp. the point that if Dea nwasnt a bit OOC, it would not have come to sex, but I had to include sex because I wrote this after a friend prompted me.

Hmmm. SWSS is my love child. So if you read and enjoy it... you go!