pirosn!sex ficlet 2

[griva_x]

This is an equally short ficlet-sequel to my prison!sex S&D drabble Black and Blue.

How Dean would deal with an aftermath?

Title: Blank
Rating: R
Pairings: no sex in this ficlet (please, don't run away yet!)
Warnings: implied non-con
Wordcount: 325
beta: inlaterdays. /smishes/
Notes: if you read Black and Blue before, this will make more sense.

Comments

[griva_x]

When you don't need more, eh? You' re just used to reading 15 pages long chapters! ;)

I'm experimenting with the form, so to say.

[decadentdreams]

I have a huge kink for prison!fic and this one fits the bill nicely. Seriously brutal and dark - I definitely want more of this one.

“Don’t touch me.” Dean says in a stranger’s voice.

This line *hurts* me every time (and I'm not even a Dean fangirl) - it just says so much, so simply. <3

[griva_x]

Ah, there is certainly a huge lack of SPN prison!fics, long or short. I had to do smthg with it.

I' m glad it stirred you. You' ve rea them both, right?

[warpedsexuality]

Again, too realistic for my taste. As in, too traumatic for my taste. But there are some nice details, like Sam being unaware of the extent of the attack, which I personally only realised in the end, same time as I realised *why* he is ignorant. How it's possible to keep something like that under wraps in a prison I don't know, but I can see how you would want to shave away any further explanation for this short a fic. And technically, the rape scenario is done well because it's poignant. Hence the first sentences of this fb :)

In the last lines the development becomes so glimpsed-in-fragments that the piece is most easily identifiable as a ficlet - which it is, so... duh, but it's not my favourite form. I usually like my fiction more wordy than the ficlet allows, and I'm not a big fan of the callous tone that this very short form tends to assist.

[griva_x]

Heh heh. All my f-list prefers 10 page fics, I KNOW.
But I don't have an intent ever to write such a long prison fic w/o skating into a million of cliches.

IMHO that's the whole POINT of such drabbles, to shock reader into awareness with the discovery at the end, drop quick flashbacks, glances to make reader realize what had happened. :) So yeah, if you *got* the idea what had happened, than I reached my point. /beams/

So, it was a nice excercise. I do plan to write maybe more (and using more words, LOL) in this verse, but later.

Btw, have you seen Folsom Prison Blues ep?

[warpedsexuality]

Yes, I saw the ep once upon a time. I haven't seen it lately so it's probably among the files I couldn't access on Lu's dvd's. There were a few eps I couldn't see. As far as I recall the action is pretty blah, but there is some nice manhandling of Dean. And like I told Lu, I've always been a sucker for prison garbs, so that was... entertaining :P

[griva_x]

Ha. It's not a universal secret that the plots are mostly *always* blah on SPN and we watch either for some action or (mostly) for the manhandling or angsty moments. I must admit I don't knowwhat I prefer, if the bros manhandle each other or somebody else manhandles them. :)

Btw, about manhandling manips: umm...have maybe one or two of them (you've seen them). I can of course go through my manip collection and uload couple more that look *real* and cute (omg, I just admitted the fact that I DO look at the cute fluffy stuff too).

[mymuseandi]

I think you should write longer! i wasn't really satisfied about the Folsom Prison Blues eppy, cuz i thought that they should explore more of what could have happened to the boys there, considering that they've never gone to prison before. :)

Turning it into a series? yes!!!

[griva_x]

I write longer, but not this particular verse. :)

Ah, what was cool in FPB ep - manhandling of Dean and bros wearing orange! Teh rest...ahem...I can't even call it imitation of reality!

Thanks for reading!

[a_phoenixdragon]

Fucking...AWESOME!!!

*Angsty fangirling and squeeing!!*

Oh, DEAN!! Always too pretty and brave for your own good! *sobs*

*Clings to you*

[griva_x]

YAY! You' re so...enthusiastic! :)

Thank you, glad you liked it. Next thing I post...will be waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay longer!

[a_phoenixdragon]

*Laughs*

OH!! *Claps!*

Gimme, gimme!!

*Smishes*