fic post !

[griva_x]

This is an entirely new thing for me (but not professionally new): I've taken up translating. I've never seen a story with Dean/Adam since Jump the Shark aired, and when I read this story on a Russian SPN forum, I decided my English friends must read it too.

ENJOY!

Comments

[inlaterdays]

Yay, you posted :)

[griva_x]

I've actually rewritten some parts. To make it more...atmospheric. :)

[griva_x]

Hey! Thanks for reading! :)

My fav part is Sam's angst and suspicions about Dean and Adam, the end of the story wasnt so powerful, imo, though i tried to emphasize it more than the auhtor herself. But yeah, it's a good try for me. :)

[juchalina]

Как я пропустила момент, когда все помешались на Адаме или Бруке?

[griva_x]

Так никто не помешался на Адаме, это единственный фик, который я нашла.

[juchalina]

Я имею ввиду не только фики. Я где-то видела пикспамы его и мастурбаториум в комментах. Ну не знаю... По мне так он слишком сладкий. Даже слаще, чем Дженс с его пони.

[absrip]

I finally got to this!:P Excellent and creepy. It has this disjointed feeling to it, and you can really feel Sams desperation over how Dean seems to be rejecting him and replacing him with Adam. The Alistar scene was disturbing but then I'm a bit queasy when it comes to torture scenes, and I really didn't get it was all in Sam's mind before the last lines, I thought maybe it was a AU:)

This makes me wonder how many other great fanfics I'm missing out on, cause I aren't able to read the language they are written in, so thanks a lot for this Olga, I'm looking forward to a J2 one!

[griva_x]

Hey bb! Thanks a LOT for the kind words. I somehow dont feel this fic was a success, but it was a nice excercies. :) I did try to smoothen the *disjointed* feeling, but if it still shows...and you liekd it...cool! :)

[absrip]

I did like the "disjointness"(is that even a word??) It serve the way the fic is supposed to be a part of Sam's fever dreams in 4.21.

Well you've got to try out things even it they don't become popular*grin* I have a new vid I'm working on that I would very much like for you to look over when it's done, probably first by the end of the month though. I'm trying out some new things(for me anyway) in it, but I'm a bit concerned about the outcome:)) It's my Sweet charity vid and I really, really don't want to disappoint my buyer*gulp*

[griva_x]

Thanks for the review! :)
Actually if you read Russian, you'd be even more confused! :)