thom yorke review

[grneyedaltlady]

Here you go, Margaret, hope this is okay

Comments

[ladyragnell]

Awesome. I just sent it in. I hope you don't mind me making a few corrections (grammar, syntax, etc.)? Nothing major, just a couple of things.

[daddy_twofoot]

Criticisms:

"Really" is a bad adjective. Just saying...
Why'd you hyphenate his name?
"Must remember". Not most.
"..because they are so completely different." Don't like that clause.

Love the ending. Good review. A-. You're my heroine. Aren't you glad I added the "e"? I need some freakin' sleep...I'm rambling.

[safe_insanity]

i LOVE this article.

[liviechick101]

I love you! And i wish you death for all your smartness.