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grnidshrk

Fumes in our Lungs, Blood on Our Knuckles

Aug 13, 2011 22:42

Fumes in our Lungs, Blood on our Knuckles
Rating: PG-13
Chapter: One-shot (Sort of a sequel/companion to Oil for Blood and Blood on My Hands, Scars Still Bleeding Oil, Obfuscating Our Pain, Scent of Oil and Need in the Air)
Fandom: Fast and Furious Series (A little bit of Assassin's Creed, if you squint. I'm not incorporating the whole game into the ( Read more... )

fast and furious, crossover, vince, oil in my veins, brian o'connor, slash

Comments 2

devilishangel03 August 14 2011, 17:06:33 UTC

loved vince's point of view. loved the last sentence. can't wait for more.

sofi_skoog August 14 2011, 20:10:01 UTC

You do Rome's and Vince's voices really good and I like how the plot is going and the way you show it from different veiwpoints. You do Rome's and Vince's voices really good but the other's you do a bit too descriptive, you migth want to avoid using 'the blonde' as it as been done and overdone in many fandoms. Looking forward to where you will go with this. <3