love birds
I was sitting there on the couch with my two friends. They were both dating someone, and neither of the "better halves" went to school with them...or really hung out. These two were talking about their "soul mates" and the houses they were going to have with the white picket fences and the dog. The two point five children, the sons being named
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and hockey is always good.
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Your dialogue is great, but I think though you could use some more specifics at certain points (for instance, where is this happening? what's the room like? what's the bathroom like? what team? what drugs?).
But overall, this is a hell of a piece: I love the plot, the characters resound, and I empathize with Dominique completely.
Oh, and by the way, if I'm with someone, please don't stab me - a corkscrew seems it would be especially painful.
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