Chapter 21

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Hey y’all

Mongoose Chapter Chapter 21

So. My grammar. Oh Lordy. chienne_folle is SO great. She picked up over 40 problems. My favourite bad habit is writing two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction, but not putting a comma! Lol. It’s so bad it is funny.

Hope you all enjoy.

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Comments

[chienne_folle]

There's a liveliness to your writing that few writers can manage. If you only have the energy for one thing, comma placement is not it. :-) That said, your editor would be thrilled if you managed liveliness AND comma placement. :-)

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I WILL!

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[mywitch]

Oh grrrrrl, you know how to make my day!!!

ETA - and chienne_folle has a lovely big brain! :D

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Hope you like it! Xx

[mywitch]

I fell asleep in my soup last night, so TONIGHT! I can't fucking wait. :D