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APH: Build Up (1/?)

Jan 15, 2010 22:39

Title: Build Up, Part One
Author: grosse_averse
Characters: South Italy, Spain, with cameos from the rest of the "students" // for now, one-sided Spamano, because dammit, Spain shouldn't be the only one working hard for this fucking relationship. Also a hint of Netherlands/Spain later on.
Rating: PG-13, for Lovino's mouth, of course!
Summary: AU. Lovino's spent ( Read more... )

north italy, hetalia, south italy, fanfiction: hetalia, le lys & la rose, spain, au, canada, rome, prussia

Comments 25

indigo_ire January 16 2010, 18:54:33 UTC

Pff, Alfred going over at Ivan's house, nice. And Matt and Gil getting frisky in front of Antonio, and him not even noticing. XD

You know what would be awesome? If Lovi and Antonio found out that they both love tomatoes, and they start bonding over it. Tomato love = win! <3

Can't wait for updates! :D

grosse_averse January 18 2010, 01:30:32 UTC

I love oblivious!Antonio!

Ahaha that would be the best thing ever! What a cute idea - united by tomatoes! Thank you for commenting :)

habueris January 16 2010, 19:27:14 UTC

You don't know where you're going with it? Well, now you know how I feel - that's what happens with every story I've ever written...ever.

OTL

No but seriously. This is too cute, I can't wait for more chapters. <333

grosse_averse January 18 2010, 01:31:20 UTC

I'm sorry D: It's a sucky feeling so I sympathize! Thank you for commenting.

habueris January 18 2010, 01:38:36 UTC

Haha, as always, you're very welcome!

soofichan January 16 2010, 22:01:27 UTC

Oh, Spamano, why do I not love you as often as I want to? Maybe 'cause I don't like tomatos. /shot by Lovino

I love these two, really I do. Poor Spain! He may be a bit oblivious, but Lovino is really not making it any easier for him.

Wherever you decide on taking it, it's gonna be great. :3

We've been over how awesome your PruCan is a million times but this story isn't even about them, so I need to shut up about how cute they are, really. Though they have met their cuteness rival in Spamano. :O

grosse_averse January 18 2010, 01:32:59 UTC

D-don't say that too loudly!!

Thank you for commenting! I can't resist slipping PruCan into everything! Though Spamano is a very good rival to this cuteness...now I'm torn...

littlelinor January 17 2010, 10:07:45 UTC

I have to say I find it hilarious that Alfred is over at Ivan's house but Arthur finds it necessary to housesit.
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But then it's Gilbert we're talking about.

grosse_averse January 18 2010, 01:34:37 UTC

Haha, well, Arthur hasn't met Ivan yet...I'm pretty sure he'd be more concerned. For now, however, Gilbert is the more pressing issue in Arthur's "parent handbook" :P Thank you for commenting!

kaliona January 17 2010, 14:30:06 UTC

I don't know why I am up so early, but this is a nice little morning surprise. I have finally gotten around to commenting on some of your things! (I cannot believe how busy I've been lately! @__@)

I love it when people write this pairing right. I don't know how to describe what I just said, but you just wrote Lovino and Antonio... perfectly. <33 And who's in the Vargas house? Rome? :'D M-Maybe other households will be expanded on in the near future (I'm still upset that I never got to meet Gilbert's Father, who looks like 'motherfucking Legolas,' which I was greatly looking forward to, but oh well, I have Marcus. <3

Afuuu. Si, I greatly missed reading your things. You must write more to feed my poor, pathetic little soul. u___u

grosse_averse January 18 2010, 01:36:36 UTC

Did you have something to do? Either way, sometimes it's nice to get up early, you can get a lot done!

I actually have a story planned that involves Gil's father and his epic hair, so don't worry! For now, though, I thought I'd slip Rome in because I think he's adorable :)

Thank you for commenting :) I greatly missed talking to you, but I hope your business is not overwhelming you!

kaliona January 18 2010, 03:50:16 UTC

...Awww. <33 I missed you, too! No, I had absolutely nothing to do. I just woke up very early and couldn't go back to sleep.

Oh my goodness. I cannot wait to see Gilbert and Ludwig's amazing, amazing family. Rome is always welcome. He slipped in and kinda got me off guard, and I said to myself, "Woah, when did you get here?" And he told me, "Lol, a second ago," and I responded. "Cool."

I've been busy with schoolwork I suppose. And I just auditioned for a musical at my school, so if I get it, I'll probably continue to be busy. owo But, I'll work something out, I'm sure! Keep writing, I'll keep commenting (And if I don't comment, Trust me, I always read it).