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APH: Build Up (2/?)

Jan 19, 2010 14:07

Title: Build Up, Part Two
Author: grosse_averse
Characters: South Italy, Spain, with cameos from the rest of the "students" // for now, one-sided Spamano, because dammit, Spain shouldn't be the only one working hard for this fucking relationship. Also a hint of Netherlands/Spain. Past? Present? Decide.
Rating: PG-13, for Lovino's mouth, of course!
Summary: AU. ( Read more... )

hetalia, south italy, netherlands, fanfiction: hetalia, le lys & la rose, spain, au, rome

Comments 40

dokami January 19 2010, 21:28:52 UTC

God, the last line is just heart-breaking.
;w; Poor Lovino

-And you're listening to Sympathy for the devil 8D!-

grosse_averse January 20 2010, 01:19:32 UTC

Thank you for commenting :)

And unf I i love Sympathy for the Devil

yuuko_81 January 19 2010, 21:31:03 UTC

Liked the first part and i really enjoyed the second! And I'm a sucker for Spain/Holland! I'm looking forwards to the next chapter!

grosse_averse January 20 2010, 01:20:10 UTC

Thank you! I wasn't quite sure about Spain/Holland to start with, but hey, they have way more history than who I usually pair Holland with D:

raindiae January 19 2010, 22:11:36 UTC

Ohmyyy I love this and I usualy don't go for fics all that often :D
Man, Lovi is just one big ANGST-FEST I adore the way you you write about him and dammit Antonio couldn't be any cuter x3

grosse_averse January 20 2010, 01:20:51 UTC

Thank you for commenting!
Haha I felt bad I was portraying him as such a jerk so I thought I would explain his angst a little bit D:

inuyashacooks January 19 2010, 22:48:41 UTC

8D huzzah this was updated! first off I gotta say that I really love the way you write Lovino :O you catch his personality really well. ahh and the backstory you gave the Vargas family :'D I loved it.

oh and...Spain/Holland 8D

grosse_averse January 20 2010, 01:21:40 UTC

Thank you very much!

Yess Spain/Holland :D :D :D

habueris January 19 2010, 23:51:50 UTC

Awww, Poor Romano. ; n ;

I really love how you're written the whole scene with little Romano and his mom. It was too sweet. ; u ;

grosse_averse January 20 2010, 01:22:24 UTC

Thank you for commenting :) I always wondered who would actually marry a guy like Rome and be able to put up with him for so long

habueris January 21 2010, 22:39:59 UTC

KUMAJIRO WOULD MARRY HIM.

Whoa sorry....I was looking at your avvie. But that's still my new OTP.

grosse_averse January 21 2010, 23:02:39 UTC

AHAHAHA GENIUS! Rome would prattle on about stupid shit and Kuma just wouldn't give a fuck!
OTP FOR LIFE