APH: Build Up (3/3)

[grosse_averse]

Title: Build Up, Part Three
Author: grosse_averse
Characters: South Italy, Spain, with cameos from the rest of the "students" // for now, one-sided Spamano, because dammit, Spain shouldn't be the only one working hard for this fucking relationship. Also a hint of Netherlands/Spain. Past? Present? Decide.
Rating: PG-13, for Lovino's mouth, of course!
Summary: AU

Comments

[kaliona]

; u ; I'm a little depressed that this is the end. I hope you continue this amazing verse! I'm sending it to my friend to read ( her LJ is MissMolii ), because it needs more love.

Aww, Lovino! I just wanna cuddle him or something!

Kaliona says: i wanna go to the axis cafe.
MissMolii says: ... me too.
Kaliona says: i want italy to make me pasta and i want japan to make me kawaii treats.
MissMolii says: i want germany to be my waitress
Kaliona says: ...Oh my god.

[grosse_averse]

Well, I had to end it somewhere! And they don't seem the couple to just suddenly get together. It has to take time, man~~

Also - your friend is absolutely epic. I want to take a picture of the cafe when I go past it next.

[inuyashacooks]

Then Lars snorted a noseful of pop onto the table. "Oh my God he does!!" he sputtered.

"Oh, ew." Matthew whimpered, staring at his liquid speckled textbook. "Oh ew, Lars, why?"

win XD

ahhh so first off, i have to say that i just notice how well you write Antonio- he's written so, so well here :D and bahhh, this was so cute! i like how you've decided to have their relationship develop gradually. all in all i like how you tied it all up, and am looking forward to reading more from this AU ;D

[inuyashacooks]

oh whoops html fail XD sorry that the whole thing is in italics XD

[grosse_averse]

Thank you for commenting :) I love Antonio, he's so stupidly dense. Between him and Lovino's bark being worse than his bite, I feel like the two deserve each other D:

[habueris]

I couldn't figure out what the "comment" button was, orz.

Oh god I love possessive Lovino, and Matthew talking to him in the bathroom was adorable. <3 NEVER STOP WRITING!

[grosse_averse]

Haha I definitely don't mean to hide it!
Thank you for persevering though :) I loved writing that part - Lovino's gonna bitch slap people who try to touch what's his /shot

[habueris]

HAHA, You're quite welcome. *heroic pose*
I would pay to see that, though

[soofichan]

Matt. So naughty. Hahaha, I always knew he had a bad streak underneath all that shyness. And I'm loving Lars something awful. Or awesome, either works.

I think the gradual sort of relationship works really well for Spain and Romano, actually. Lovino seems to be the skittish-type, doesn't he? Underneath all that armour he's built up, that is. And dense!Antonio is dense. He's a cutie, but a thick one, sometimes. He and Romano make the dorkiest proto-couple. <3

Even though this story is Spamano, I think my favourite bit was when Lars tried to grope Matt. Jealous!Gilbert is fun, haha.

This universe is so much fun, I hope there's some more coming up sometime soon!

[grosse_averse]

Well, I mean, he puts up with Gilbert, he has to have something under that quiet front!

They do make an awkward couple, don't they? Either Lovino has to learn not to take offence at Antonio's constant thick headed-ness, or Antonio's going to have to use that flow chart.

Haha, Lars is very good at making people mad in a very short amount of time - plus that is sort of foreshadowing for a later story ;)

Thank you for commenting!! <3

[soofichan]

It's always the quiet ones you have to watch out for, isn't it.

I think Toni'll need a whole binder full of flow charts to handle Lovino. Although, I can see that if he has to flip through it every time something happens, Lovi's just going to get madder. It'd be kind of like an unending downward spiral for poor Spain, haha.

This foreshadowing has me more excited than I probably have a right to be. :D Prussia/Canada/Netherlands love triangle? yes plz

(Please excuse my chattiness, I'm avoiding re-writing a research proposal :S)

[grosse_averse]

I know, right? One of life's lessons, right there.

Haha oh my God I can just imagine Antonio going, "Wait, wait, Gil made me a flow chart for in case I called you a tomato...hold on..." and them just standing in the middle of the hallway while he tries to find it XD

Hahaha what I can't tell you that

(As much as I love talking to you I feel guilty that I'm taking you away from your work!)

Re: Axis Café? Really? That's cool~

[grosse_averse]

Really really! All lame connections to a webcomic aside, it looks like an interesting place - I'm thinking of making my friend go there with me and not telling her why

Thank you so much for commenting :) I'm glad you are liking this verse! This is definitely just the beginning for these two.

St-stalking? Like Belarus?? Hooray!

Ahh translate? So cool, so cool, I wish I knew enough of another language to switch between the two!

Re: Axis Café? Really? That's cool~

[grosse_averse]

D: I have no homework tonight.

You should open up a cafe! START A REVOLUTION. SERVE COFFEE AND SCONES. OR SOMETHING.

What is your mother tongue?