APH: Into the Face of the Beguiled (6/?)

[grosse_averse]

Title: Into the Face of the Beguiled (Chapter Six)
Author: grosse_averse, tatterdemalion on ff.net
Characters: in this chapter - Prussia, Canada, America, France, Netherlands, Seychelles, Lithuania, Spain, South Italy
Rating: M just to be safe because there's some almost-but-not-quite stuff in here D:
Summary: AU. Alfred and Matthew Jones, expert runaways and

Comments

[soofichan]

must be funny~

uwwwwah, Alfred! :< Protective!Matt is really sweet though. I just love those boys. ♥ The Gilbert/Matt/Lars triangle is starting to develop now, is it? Jealous!Gilbert is cute, strangely. They should just have a threesome. I wouldn't mind.

Cute!Spamano is cuuuute. Flustered!Toris is cuuuute! I can't wait to see some more fleshing out of their relationship.

(No Arthur yet? ;^; /is such an Arthur fangirl.)

[grosse_averse]

Thank you for commenting :)

Unf so many people keep suggesting that threesome it's starting to sound better and better as time goes on /icon

And Arthur's coming soon...he originally was going to have to wait a couple chapters but I think he may be arriving sooner than I expected..

[ikanadian]

Oh, dear Alfred. ; 3; *cries*. . .
I-I hope things get better for those two.

I thought the little Antonio and Lovino part was very adorable though, so it didn't make the chapter a pile of misery. xD (Not like it would be bad or anything, I just like happy things a lot. :D)

Thanks for the update. *__*~~~~

[grosse_averse]

Thank you for commenting :)

I like happy things too, I don't even know why I'm writing this story. Every chapter I have to fight the urge to write, "and then it was all a dream and they woke up and had a pillow fight and ate cookies THE END"

I'm, I'm kidding. :(

[ikanadian]

Fwaaaaah~~~ You are writing this story 'cause you're AWESOME? *sparklesparkle*

No, really though. I haven't read a fanfiction so well written in so long. I await anxiously for your updates, you've got a lot of us hooked. ;3 It's a great story, with great development, plus I need to pull myself out of the kiddie zone anyways. 8'D *punch'd*

[grisseykey]

I just have read the whole story and I find it very interesting. I feel really bad for the boys, but at the same time I wonder how they're going to adapt to this world. Also, I like the way you manage the other characters and how they live this life as their normal life. I don´t know, sorry, I'm not good at words even in my mother tongue, but you get it xD

In this chapter I really liked the balance of all what happen to Al and the light and sweet appearance of Toris and Antonio <3

[grosse_averse]

Thank you for commenting :) I'm really glad you like it!

[grosse_averse]

Shiny, fresh hell? Haha, what an interesting description :D
Thanks very much for commenting. I think if I used a Hetalia character to do the stuff "Sir" did, I would cry D:

[alors_indikaze]

H-hi, first time reader here. Just caught up.

Your tone is very lovely, and your characterizations are both recognizable and imaginative.

Especially Magnificent Bastard!France. I mean, wow. He is frightening, manipulative, sad, and very... beautiful? In his own special France way. In this scene alone he managed to be protective, comforting... but he seemed suspiciously quick to "check over" our poor boys, and I don't think that sigh of relief was wholly for them...

Gah, I am hooked. ;_;

[grosse_averse]

Hi! :) Thanks so much for leaving a comment - I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

I'm not going to lie, France is by far my favourite character to write about in here. I love writing about that bastard side of him. I think he's got loads of potential as far as character/personality/history.

Thanks again :)