APH: Put On Your Masquerade (5/6)

May 06, 2010 11:53

Title: Put On Your Masquerade (5/6)
Author: grosse_averse
Characters: ...a lot D: - in this part, Russia, Ukraine, Estonia, Belarus, Prussia, America, Canada, North Italy, Germany, Germania, Netherlands, Belgium, Luxembourg (OC), Japan, China, Korea, South Italy, Spain.
Rating: Probably PG-13, for some (eventual) make outs
Summary: The All Hallow's Eve dance is ( Read more... )

belgium, netherlands, le lys & la rose, estonia, prussia, luxembourg, north italy, hetalia, belarus, america, south italy, fanfiction: hetalia, germany, spain, korea, germania, au, canada, russia, ukraine, japan, china

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soofichan May 6 2010, 18:56:06 UTC
So you know I love you. I'm also loving your Margot. How is she so awesome? And Katya too! The girls are stealing the show this time, I think.

I also really like the little tidbits of all the other pairings~ Oh Feli, I really hope you pick out the costumes for you and Ludwig, because they wouldn't be half as great if Luddy did it.

Ahh, the dance is next! I'm excited~

Also you are listening to that song~

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grosse_averse May 6 2010, 23:53:26 UTC
Haha and you know I love you too~~ I love badass girl characters, where did those go? We need to bring them back.

Haha Ludwig's idea of a costume would be those pixies from Fairly Odd Parents or something D:

Ahh I love that sooon

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grosse_averse May 6 2010, 23:53:45 UTC
and by 'sooon' I meant 'soooong' of course

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soofichan May 7 2010, 00:26:17 UTC
:3~ We should, definitely. Though you have to be careful because if you try too hard to make a girl character awesome you end up with Bella Swan and no one wants that. D:

I would pay to see Ludwig dressed up as Cosmo. Feli would make a good Wanda though. XD

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faerichylde May 6 2010, 22:44:25 UTC
dsa;lfjaslkgjfd you know how long i was waiting for this to be updated???? sa;lkdfakls ITS SO GOOOOOOD ♥♥♥

your belgium is AWESOMENESSSS and so is your alfred/ivan. your ivan in particular is really well characterized ♥♥♥ i'm stalking you until you update the last part XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd

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grosse_averse May 6 2010, 23:54:09 UTC
Haha I'm sorry I took so long! But thank you I'm glad you liked it. Hooray for floozy!Belgium!

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chromatic_coma May 7 2010, 23:30:04 UTC
God, you write too well. I love Margot and Lars so much, especially with their fail at being sneaky XD

And I feel bad for the Vargas brothers. Their dates are so thick :(

I guess most of all, though, I wanna see Al and Ivan get together and Al is going to be Superman for the dance isn't he?

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grosse_averse May 11 2010, 22:52:27 UTC
Thank you for commenting :) fail!Benelux is I think my favourite part of this story.

Sometimes if you want a job done you have to do it yourself, in the case of the Italian brothers

OMG shuuuush

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niki_uchiha May 8 2010, 11:43:09 UTC
am i sensing some larsxkiku here?

it makes sense that antonio would not have asked lovino to the dance and have to ask him himself, antonio probably assumed that he didnt have to and that they were just going to go together XP

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grosse_averse May 11 2010, 22:53:54 UTC
Uh, yeah, haha, maybe a little? :D Someone planted it in my head in the Netherlands community and it wouldn't leave me alone.

I'm thinking if Lovino hadn't said anything and had just gone home to sulk, Antonio would have just shown up at his door with this stupid grin on his face, all, "What are you yelling about, let's go! We're late!"

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orangepencils May 11 2010, 01:55:48 UTC
youuuuu you and your wonderful writing and brilliant clever use of words!

this was awesome as always! i loved the multitude of characters in it and the interactions between the whole lot as well!

GOOD JOB AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! i look forward to the next chapter!

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grosse_averse May 11 2010, 22:54:46 UTC
:D Haha you're amazing. Thank you for commenting!

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