APH: For the Lovely Miss Rena

Sep 02, 2010 22:01

Title: Change Your Mind
Author: grosse_averse
Rating: R for sexy feet times eventually ending in actual sexy times.
Characters: France, Canada
Warnings: Badly written, spur of the moment, foot fetish, pooorn.
Summary: France shows up at Canada's house. Canada interprets it in his usual-but-super-annoying self-deprecating way.

Notes: Belated birthday present ( Read more... )

france, canada, hetalia, rena, fanfiction: hetalia

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shini_chii September 4 2010, 16:37:13 UTC
Oh yes, snarky!Canada and foot fetish (a Franada kink meme fill made me interested in reading fics with that particular fetish :P. The irony).

I loved everything, but specially the last bits. It saddens me that no one takes Francis seriously, so having that acknowledged really picked up my interest. Also, delicious, snarky Canada is a big plus (yes, I had to mention it twice) <333.

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grosse_averse September 4 2010, 22:51:33 UTC
snarky!Canada, my favourite. I want him to be a brat. People like to make him super perfect and he is so not.
Also, I think France is one of the most overlooked characters in Hetalia. Not overlooked like, "Lololol Canada is invisible" or "I don't know enough about the history to write this character!" but in more of a, "Let's just keep with the pervert stereotype and not have him be serious, ever!!"
Thank you for reading!

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o0litodreamer0o September 5 2010, 07:29:55 UTC
Dahling, OH DAHLING, I don't even know if I can string together enough words to tell you how much I appreciated this fic.
But then I wonder - if you don't like feet all that much, what possessed you to write it? Surely I didn't dare you to do this. I prefer the "you have to lift your shirt or dress whenever someone asks you about Montréal" dare. Now that's funny XD
I totally would have replied to this earlier if I was wasn't flipping shit around on the same night that you posted this haha ^^;;

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grosse_averse September 5 2010, 20:00:05 UTC
<3 <3

To be quite honest with you I have no idea how it turned to feet. No you did not dare me to do this, haha.

Sorry you were flipping shit :( You should've come over to watch The Tudors with AB and I! I was making jokes about Wolsey that were highly inappropriate.

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emudii September 14 2010, 04:24:42 UTC
I'm neutral about feet; I know that they're supposed to be an erogenous zone, but it's not something you'd normally sit around, hot and heavy, thinking about trying out on someone. That said, the subject matter wasn't as distracting for me as it could have been. And, actually, I think it probably added to the charm.

I loved the characterization. It was fresh, honest, and completely candid. These two are so overlooked and under-appreciated in canon (and neither are taken seriously at all) so it's always nice to find someone who is doing them justice. :)

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grosse_averse September 14 2010, 05:32:56 UTC
Well regardless of opinions on feet (I'm afraid I can't agree with you, feet are, usually without exception, super unattractive things for me) I'm glad you liked it :) Thank you very much for reading!

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emudii September 14 2010, 12:07:01 UTC
Ahaha. To clarify, feet are not charming. Rather, the charm comes from the fact that via this fetish, you allowed Canada to be distracted and react strongly, thereby asserting himself ("sdfhsdf my foot!") instead of having half-hearted hormones ("adjhsa my neck!"/"...footsie?"). Canada sticking up for himself? It turns me on. *whew* ♥

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