Zen and Head Injuries (?)

[grumblykins]

Another bomb goes off; smoke spills over the road, and the air is filled with shards of bone and rock.  The sky spins overhead.  Clutching my head in one hand, Frozen Smoke in the other, I stagger back from my opponent; he is equally unsteady, his clawed hands momentarily withdrawn back into his arms, the remaining skin covering his skull a rictus

Comments

[bakeneko]

This is perfectly brilliant. Just wonderful. Thank you so much.

[kumir_k9]

You sir are fantastic! That was such a vivid description of everything. I wish I could see the world in the imagery that you do. That brought shivers to my spine. Well done. Thank you so much for writing it.

[jjmarika]

This is amazing. Thanks for sharing. :)

[tetsutora]

better than mine, i is jelly.

[grumblykins]

I had to read that like ten times before I understood it.

And yours isn't better or worse! It's awesomesauce and your own, god damn it! You have a great style; I'm jelly of your brevity and word choice, frankly.