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grungust

The Black March

Jul 20, 2009 21:16

Fandom: Code Geass
Title: The Black March
Genre: Drama, Angst, Alternate Universe
Characters: Lelouch, Kallen (Lelouch/Kallen is you squint)
Spoilers: Episode 25
Rated: R
Summary: Lelouch is going slightly mad.
( When itchy trigger fingers triumph )

angst, unoriginal, au, lelouch, drama, kallen, code geass

Comments 4

tenohikari July 21 2009, 05:55:29 UTC

Simply amazing! I loved how Kallen came looking for him and the last line was heart breaking and yet it redeemed Lelouch a little bit. I think I like your AU end than the canon's.

grungust July 21 2009, 16:48:27 UTC

That duality is one of the things that made Lelouch so interesting, so I'm happy to see you think I pulled it off. Thank you

star_jinin July 22 2009, 03:52:12 UTC

This was incredibly BREATHTAKING. Despite the fact that he shot Suzaku, the strenghtening in Lelouch and Kallen's resolve is amazing. I mean, Shirley's father was one thing, but when a death happened to Lulu so PERSONALLY...oh god, words cannot express my total awe and adoration for this fic! As much as I hate the idea of Suzaku being dead...

grungust July 22 2009, 04:02:14 UTC

It's quite generous of you to say as much.

I do think Suzaku is a genuinely interesting character, but I wondered how Lelouch would carry the burden of killing him. I doubted they would kill off their lead, so I honestly thought the writers would axe Suzaku instead, and it got the gears turning. To make a long story short, that's how we wound up here.

Thanks again for reading