poetry assignment... I hate and suck at poetry. :P

[gryfinnincubus]

I find myself at natures edge

Comments

[mewilliamson]

i like it. it does a good job of conveying the thought, and flows reasonably well. some of the wording you chose is rather archaic, but that could be a something you chose to do.

[gryfinnincubus]

the reason is actually because its pulled from other poems. The assignment was to intermix lines from a poem we'd read in class into 25 lines of your own writing.

I should've mentioned that..