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[gryphart]

Comments

[leemoyer]

Lovely.
The piece of the first one that doesn't read to me is the prone woman's legs. It's off to a great start (middle?) and I'll look forward to seeing it finished.

[gryphart]

Hmmm... I will try to make the folds wrap better there.

[leemoyer]

I think it's the color of the legs. I found them more like bkgd than "of" her. Perhaps a new color and a seam and/or pattern in the fabric?

You're doing good work. I look forward to seeing the next phase. :)

[april_art]

Wow, love the color and all the flying drapery of the first piece. Looks like it's coming along very well!

Wolfie with pauldrons is very cool, too.

[leemoyer]

I just realized that what I thought was the right side of the plinth is simply her fallen cowl and cape. Perhaps SHOW the right side of the plinth? That wat we'd get to see some of the standing figure's drapery and I think it would help that character seem real.