Awesome- but a quick thing I noticed- it looks like the thumb on the witch-lady's hand is coming out of her ring finger. At least, I think it's a thumb. I could be wrong.
Fab! I think it's my favorite of your pieces. You did indeed "fix" the bits I mentioned, and I think the piece is the better for those changes. But now the prone woman's hair needs to fall (at least most of it). I think that by bringing the hair down a bit diagonally and having it blow around you'll make her more feminine into the bargain...
I concur about the thumb (just fade it back a little into the magical mist and you should be golden. The aspect ration seems a bit wide/short to me. I'd shave some of the right side off (about 1/2 inch or 1/2 of a spine width if this was a paperback cover) and add a bit to the top.
I love the blowing leaves and I'd include some more of those lower right as well. All my picayune detail-orientness is really just my saying BRAVO! This is already a champ, and should become an even mightier one. :)
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I concur about the thumb (just fade it back a little into the magical mist and you should be golden. The aspect ration seems a bit wide/short to me. I'd shave some of the right side off (about 1/2 inch or 1/2 of a spine width if this was a paperback cover) and add a bit to the top.
I love the blowing leaves and I'd include some more of those lower right as well. All my picayune detail-orientness is really just my saying BRAVO! This is already a champ, and should become an even mightier one. :)
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Sleep well!
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