The Happiest Place on Earth, Chapter 24

Jan 03, 2012 14:24

The following is a story that I have been tinkering with for a year and a half. I have gone back and forth on parts of it. It starts off on a rather heavy note, but lightens up to match the title. I can only “hope” it works for you all.

Pairing: Miranda / Andrea - ‘cause I just can’t seem to care about any others.
Caroline and Cassidy are with us on ( Read more... )

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steampunky January 3 2012, 21:10:27 UTC
Each chapter you manage to make both characters that little bit more human, I love Miranda's vulnerability here, I think it runs true to what she would be like in this situation. Although Andy needs some nice payback for her lovely last sentiment!!
Love it. Keep the amazing work coming!

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gsdcow January 4 2012, 03:26:53 UTC
Thank you. I think Miranda is showing her self more with her greater trust in Andy. They are giving each other the strength to show weaknesses. Very simbiotic. Don't worry, paybacks go back and forth w/ these two.

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mitchet3 January 4 2012, 00:23:34 UTC
oh, my dear, this is yet another yummy chapter! I love how Caroline summed everything up for Andy and made her feel better. And the interaction of Andy with Miranda - so well-played. You continue to bring more realism and love to these two ladies and it is awesome to read! Thank you for sharing!

Tammy ^_^

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gsdcow January 4 2012, 03:28:49 UTC
Thank you for all of that. I love how we can have the girls be so black and white in their views. No gray or blurry lines. Do or don't. Honesty.
Thanks for following.

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peetsden January 4 2012, 00:45:40 UTC
What I am coming to enjoy in this epic is the strength of character Miranda and Andy exhibit- be it individually or together. Miranda just needs to realize that the sum of the parts is greater than the individual parts. Thanks for a wonderful read - Peet

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gsdcow January 4 2012, 03:30:31 UTC
I hope they don't overwhelm the parents. That will be an interesting meeting. Over tired Miranda with potentially judgemental parents. Fireworks !!

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kali_blue January 4 2012, 02:52:26 UTC
This addition is fabulous.

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gsdcow January 4 2012, 03:31:24 UTC
Thanks. I can't seem to stop now. I'm out of control. How do I stop?

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kali_blue January 4 2012, 04:12:24 UTC
Why would you want to when it is going so good? LOL

I guess if the meeting with Parents goes well you could end there once they leave if it ends well or you could do more paparazzi, a big event, more sex, another parent visit with the girls, next x-mas holiday, girls graduations, etc.

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gsdcow January 5 2012, 02:39:44 UTC
Really? Graduation? Are you trying to kill me? I appreciate your willingness to read this for the next 5 years... but I really don't think I can keep it up that long. But thank you for your advice. Always helpful :)

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medora_macd January 4 2012, 06:34:51 UTC
“Miranda, my parents may have issues with you and me being together, but they would never do anything to hurt the children. I am sure they will be respectful and accepting of the girls, despite what they may decide about you.”

Looking forward to the "reveal" and hoping that Miranda IS strategic enough to find a way to get some rest before meeting Andy's parents. And looking forward to seeing how you stage everything ... there's so many delicious ways to go. Thanks again for a compelling story.

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gsdcow January 5 2012, 02:41:27 UTC
You think I should go w/ a rested Miranda? I was leaning more to the exhausted, easily pissed, "Don't poke the dragon" Miranda. We'll see. Conversations have already started in my head.

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medora_macd January 5 2012, 03:12:15 UTC
Conversations in your head, eh? Listening to what the voices are telling you? There's a lot of that going around of late...lucky us!

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