Fic-Forever

[guardianangel_x]

Title: Forever
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: None of it's mine; I think we all know that, lol
Pairings: Jacob/Bella
Notes: This is MY FIRST Twilight fic! Holy crap! Feedback would be BEYOND wonderful!
Summary: When she wakes up in the morning she knows this is the day she will die.

Comments

[shadowmynx]

This was so incredibly bittersweet and very well written, you made me cry! Amazing job.

[guardianangel_x]

Aw, thank you SO MUCH! I'm sorry I made you cry, but I'm glad you liked it!!! :D

[sunnyzim]

Oh my goodness. I am close to tears right now - that was absolutely heart-wrenching. And so beautifully written.

And then there was Jacob. A husband so wonderful, so amazing, so beyond words that she felt she’d somehow been granted an eternity of happiness.

Somehow, Bella had been given forever. His name was Jacob.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. And OH how it makes me ache. Good job, BB. I hope to see more J/B fics from you - maybe some happy ones in the future?!;)

[guardianangel_x]

*hands tissue* Don't cry! ;D I'm so glad you liked it!!! I had actually written it REALLY early in the morning (3AM lol) so I was afraid it might not be all that great, so thank you! :D

And actually, since I have nothing to do over my Thanksgiving break, I was thinking about making some other fics set in this fic's frame. Taking her memories and writing something for each one, but I don't know. It would include happy ones though!!!! :D

Again, thank you SO MUCH for reading! :D

[akkas_journal]

OMG, this actually brought a tear to my eye. I loved it! ♥

[guardianangel_x]

I'm sorry it brought that tear, but I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reading!!!!! :D

[philnggood]

Wow, this was riveting.

She still chose life, I find that fascinating and compelling.

Good job! Your first fic? Totally didn't feel like it. I want to someday write a J/B fic. I'm scared

[guardianangel_x]

Thank you!!!

Yea, I'm sorry... but I really like to think the fourth book didn't happen. She became a vampire- and with that choice, she kind of verbally slapped everyone she loved in the face. Also, I mean, this sounds silly... but if Edward had really died when he was meant to, from the influenza it was I think, they would have been together. Bella says it in the book, and it kills me everytime; Jacob was what he life would have been, and that kind of inspired this.

And again, thank you! This is not my first fic period, but it's my first fic for Twilight! LOL And OMG! WRITE ONE! SERIOUSLY! There is nothing more satisfying than writing something and then being able to read it and say "Wow, I did that". PLEASE write one, and when you DO (because you will!) send me the link!!!!!!! :D

[kryptongirl]

Wow, this was so incredibly well written and sad. This is the Bella that I want - not the selfish Bella who would accept being a vampire to stay with Jacob, but the Bella who would give it all up to stay human with him. :')

[guardianangel_x]

Thank you so much!!!!

I know what you mean!!! After seeing the movie, I just get that feeling all over again; Bella is selfish. She really is. She keeps Jacob tied to her, TELLS HIM THIS EVEN, so she can still have him in her life. She loves him, and if Edward didn't exist, they WOULD be together. It's terrible; so, in my world, she stays human and they have lots and lots of babies lol.