Bonzo.

[gucci_shoes]

Title Bonzo.
Pairing Yunho/Jaejoong - Yunho/Yoochun - Jaejoong/Changmin - Junsu/Yoochun
Warning Infidelity. Sex.
Rating NC-17
Summary Yunho and Jaejoong are married with a son named Haesik. Yunho’s medical duties are stressing him out, and Jaejoong doesn’t have as much time to spare on intimacy as he used to, causing Yunho to turn to infidelity in an

Comments

[twiglet71]

I like this!! Looking forward to the next part x

[gucci_shoes]

I'll have it up soon, I'm sure. :)

[anihimesama]

Oh God...
I'm so rooting for the JaeMin here!

[gucci_shoes]

Really? I see! :) I like Jaemin myself, but I also like Jaeho and Yoosu and minsu and.... all of the couples. They're all tugging at me! Thank you for reading.

[roughmetal2]

when a child is born, it doesn't mean the husband and wife should cease to be lovers. if yunho doesn't stop his infidelity, he'll be bringing jae closer to doing the same thing himself.

one positive note here is that junsu seems to like yoochun and vice versa. want those two to get together fast so that yoochun can leave yunho already.

[gucci_shoes]

That's what I'm saying! Unfortunately, when two people have a child, sometimes they get so distracted by raising him or her that they don't engage in each other as much as they used to and they lose touch with one another. Hopefully Yunho can patch it up and get his shit together, right? :)

Infidelity is never a good thing. We'll see what happens, then! Thank you for reading.

[snow_meow]

I wonder what is tearing both Yunho and Jaejoong apart.
There must be something which pushes Yunho to run into Yoochun's arms unless Yunho was never a faithful partner in any of his relationships.

[gucci_shoes]

My outline reminds me that all will come to light in the end. Some twists and turns, surprises and unexpected outcomes - but it'll all be explained. :) Thank you for reading!

[n3uromanc3r]

Please tell me it wasn't a oneshot - okay the abrupt ending makes me hope for a continuation but I want to be sure! : D

[gucci_shoes]

Wow! What an in-depth comment.

This is not a oneshot. There are actually ten chapters.

It's true, my Yunho is having some issues. Throughout the following chapters, more things will be explained. Yunho and Yoochun's high statures are important to the characters they portray, so keep an eye on that!

Yunho and Yoochun are old acquaintances, though the circumstances leading up to their meeting will also be explained soon.

Junsu is my down-to-earth character. I really love the way I'm writing him, because he strikes me as an honest and handsome young man. Who can deny something like that?

Changmin's going to be getting a lot of face time soon! I keep looking at my outline and I like what I've done with it, so you'll get to meet all of Changmin soon enough.

Thank you so much for reading, your feedback was awesome!

[n3uromanc3r]

Oh, it's just I like the stories that make me wonder about the characters' backgrounds and the motives behind their actions, and I just have to express my thoughts.
Actually it's a lot easier situation than when I can't write anything else in the comment just that 'I liked the story', 'It was so sweet' or something similar... : D

Anyway it that Miku on your icon, right? Cute!

[gucci_shoes]

Yesss, It's Miku. I really get excited when people leave longer comments. It lets me know if I'm writing it at a good pace, if I'm confusing them, what they think about the plot so far, etc. So thank you.