Dema- Oh my. Foreshadowing me thinks?

[gunsmoke_sues]

First off, I'd like someones opinion on this.....Is this a Bebop sue, or just a really, really confusing story, or someone stuck this in the wrong catagory? I'm baffled! My brainmeats hurt.

Anyway, on to today's Sue, which is a Trigun one. Because there's so many to choose from. Ack. This Sue, seems rife with angst. And vaguely insinuated inhuman-

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[sundragyn]

I like pale blue and mauve.

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[techno4tomcats]

Seperate, yes, but together? On a person? o_O;;

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[donna_c_punk]

She's not a person ... she's a deeeeeeeemon! Mwahahaha!

[donna_c_punk]

Unusual Markings/Colorations: "a scar on her hand was exactly the same as the symbol for the devil" counts, I think.

Oh so apropos. Where's Wolfwood? EXORCISM!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA! Exorcise Sue from our fucking fandom, please!

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[kouyama_mitsuki]

I can see it now. The Sue's head revolving around, possibly with a cheerful little siren sound... levitating while making unsettling growling noises... copiously vomiting up pea soup onto the faces of our heroes.

It probably beats the Turkish version, anyway.

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[donna_c_punk]

Oh! I hope they put this part in!

Comedy: Three and a half stars
After the doctors rattle her skull at incredible speeds and it fails to remove the satan from it, the girl’s mother calls in a hypnotist. The girl pretends to follow his watch, then with comic timing beyond that of normal non-demons, she punches him square in the balls. He crunches into a standing fetal position that is so well-acted that it’d be impossible to duplicate without actually ramming something dangerous into your groin. The only reason this film didn’t get the full four stars for Comedy is due to the lack of him waddling out of the room and saying something retarded in a high-pitched voice.

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[techno4tomcats]

Turkish verison wins hands down for sure.

[anunspiritedsue]

On the plus side, the technical aspects of the fic - grammar, etc. - weren't too bad.

On the other hand, those technical aspects were used to angst endlessly until I was about ready to punch my fist through the computer. Good Lord, Vash is angsty enough (or has cause enough for much angsting) for every character in the bloody series and he manages to put on a happy face, real or not, frequently.

But I know! Their tru wuff will unite both their sad angsty hearts and there will be neither sadness nor angsting between the two of them!

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[techno4tomcats]

I will freely admit...her grasp of the English language is more impressive than half the fandom, but still, it's no excuse for the blantant suckage of this story.

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[silver_arm]

If they mean "666," then I don't blame the townsfolk for being freaked out. What are the odds of a birthmark forming a three-digit number? A bit contrived, ne?

Huh. Sounds a bit fishy to me. I would have lynched this girl just for her whininess. The Mark of the Beast wouldn't have been a factor at all.