Comments | gunsmoke_sues: Ow, my brainmeats!

gunsmoke_sues

Ow, my brainmeats!

Feb 03, 2004 11:22

Story Or Series Title: Unknown Daughters. Now if that wasn't a Sue-ish title, I duuno what is.
Fandom: Trigun. (I haven't found many Cowboy Bebop sues of late.....most of them are just OC's....)
Culprit Author's Name: LifelongStampedeK
Summary: Two girls get sucked into the Trigun dimension and learn about thier pasts. R&R! CHAPPIE 9 UP! ( Read more... )

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greeneydgrl74 July 15 2004, 18:07:09 UTC

Okay, I admit it. My story was pretty bad. But hey, It's the first one I ever wrote! Cut me some slack! I can't use fanfiction anymore because It uses (dundunduuuun) SPY SOFTWARE!!! I am, (among other names) LifelongStampedeK, and I appreciate the critiscism... but ya know it WAS designed to be a Sue!

x_xU

Kelly, Queen of The Universe (NOT!!)

greeneydgrl74 July 15 2004, 18:14:24 UTC

I re-read this whole "comment page" and ya know what? You're right. This story has GOT to be a Mary-Sue. Only one thing. Okay. Sorry it was short, sorry it had too many author's notes, and sorry it wasn't too bland and canon to stay off your "dumb list" of the worst fanfictions ever. Heck, I write! I'm a published author. But that dosen't mean a girl can't have a little brainless fun every now and then and cast herself and her friend as supermodel character clones, who might I add are 13? it was fun to write. WTF.

Bye, and yeah I've been Sue-d.

Kelly