(08) → birds on a wire

Feb 10, 2011 16:25

title: birds on a wire
pairing: arthur/eames
summary: they're three parts stupid and two destructive.
notes: written for ze_zebra for qldfloodauction
birds on a wire )

pairing: arthur/eames

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haltlos February 10 2011, 23:09:49 UTC
Wow, this was very good. I really like your approach to forging in this. (btw in my opinion a realistic approach!)

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traincar April 1 2011, 16:30:03 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it came across well!

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traincar April 1 2011, 16:44:43 UTC

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epithalamium February 11 2011, 02:41:33 UTC
I love how gritty this is, always almost at the final straw but not nearly. I'm going to say it's almost sloppy, but your language is too good and pulls it in another direction entirely. God I love it!

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traincar April 1 2011, 16:48:31 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

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purple_spock February 11 2011, 04:31:18 UTC
Very nicely done. Just dark enough with a perfect ending. Fantastic.

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traincar April 1 2011, 16:49:21 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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epistolic February 11 2011, 05:26:09 UTC
This fic served to remind me, in the deepest, almost aching way, how much I've missed your writing. This is sparse, visceral, gorgeous. You never mince words. You place them with such care, with such purpose, I can almost feel them beating like a heart out of the computer screen. I love the open ending, the nature of compromise, the imperfection that comes with reality. Everything about this is beautiful, darling. Everything.

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traincar April 1 2011, 16:52:53 UTC
Oh gosh. Blushing so hard RN. Thank you bb. ♥

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