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Et O Ces Voix D'Enfants

Jan 30, 2006 01:03

Title: Et O Ces Voix D'Enfants
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Rufus Scrimgeour, Gabrielle Delacour, various others
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,326
Other: Written for the January contest at omniocular. Bah... I'm not pleased with it. >.< I don't know that it makes sense, and if I find the time, I'd like to go back and edit it. The idea is there, I suppose ( Read more... )

Comments 4

sea_of_tethys January 30 2006, 19:22:19 UTC

You've no need to be dissatisfied with this! I think it is quite well-done, and I really like the contrast between the different narrative styles. It is, furthermore, disturbing as anything.

guttersnipe_ February 1 2006, 19:15:56 UTC

Thank you muchly; I greatly appreciate the read and comment. :) Glad you liked the different narrative styles, as well; figured I might as well play with something. But, yes, thanks.

nekare February 1 2006, 04:10:38 UTC

Gabrielle's romantic vision of the world is described beautifully, and the outcome and ending really does chill you.

Amazing job!

guttersnipe_ February 1 2006, 19:17:01 UTC

Thank ye muchly. And aye, I very much appreciate your reading and leaving a comment. :D