My first fanfic.. again :3

[zackultimate]

Title: Sex Lesson
Pairing: Guy x Luke
Rating: NC-17 or PWP
Summary: Just random sex

I'll try again ^^ This is my first fanfic, so i'm a little scared xD I'm not english, so i hope i haven't done to much grammar mistake. Please say me if there's some error, so i can do a better work next time ^O^ This time the link should work :D

Comments

[valhibmor]

o///o that's soo cute xDD specially the ending ^^ surely your writing is great! its really good for being your first writing you know? well there are only some minor mistakes xD so please write more n__n

[kurai007]

I agree with Val, that was cute. Hehe, your writting's a lil' rought, and could use some work, but yo, English isn't your first language. So this was a really good try. <3 And I enjoyed it--nice thing to read before I run off to my math class. =D

Can't wait for more from you. And if you need a beta/someone to help you with your English, I'm willing to help. <3

See more from ya soon! Hopefully. <3

Positive Affirmation!

[red_sephira]

I agree with Val and Kurai, wholeheartedly! It made me giggle and smile, so don't worry, keep on writing! As long as you know what your audience is, why you're writing, what you want to make your audience feel, then by all means keep writing! I wish you luck in your endeavor!

Love, Red Sephira.

[pochi_tatsubon]

awww.. so cute guyxluke story!! ^^

I love it so much! ^^

please write more!! ^_^

SO CUTE

[ninjavampkitty]

I absolutely loved it! I think the ending was my favorite. Yeah, The ending was my favorite. Hey, I want your opinion on something I wrote, so E-Mail me at Nightweaver@sbcglobal.net or Raquelbreuker@yahoo.com