GW500 #345: Planet - (Distant Rumbles)

[meretseger_7]

Title: Distant Rumbles
Author: meretseger_7
Pairing/Characters: Trowa, Quatre, vague pairing-ish hints because that's how I roll.
Rating: PG13?
Word count: 2881.
Warnings/Kinks: Not really.
Summary: A thunderstorm lightens up more than the night sky during an unexpected hotel stay. Written for gw500 prompt: planet

Comments

[darthanne]

Nice. Very nice. You've captured these two so well. I love their interaction in this, and their different reactions to the storm.

[meretseger_7]

I appreciate that. The idea bit hard and wouldn't let go - I'm glad it turned out to be a good one.

I love to play with the idea that there are a ton of things about Earth that would just fascinate Quatre. Like a sunrise, or a tornado. And Trowa's just so jaded, heh. It's a fun combination to write.

[lil_1337]

This was lovely. Despite the impending mission there is a sense of peace here. You captured so well the way that Trowa talks without words as well as how Quatre views the beauty of the Earth. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for writing and posting.

[meretseger_7]

Thank you, so much. And it was a wonderful prompt! Sparked the thought right away.

It felt like it would be an interesting take on fandom's belief that Trowa went back on his denial at New Edwards. Plus, it's been raining here so much lately, thunderstorms were just... on the mind.

(I love digging around in Trowa's head more than anything else, honestly. Y'all are probably gonna see a lot of stuff about him from me. Oops?)

[lil_1337]

I envy you your rain. It is bone dry and hot here.

Trowa's head is an interesting place to wander around in. I've spent quite a few hours doing the same.

[scacao]

This was so fantastic, my gosh. I love your characterization of Trowa. Please never stop writing, thanks.... lol

[meretseger_7]

Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that. I promise you'll see more from me in the future. :)