[Fic] Nightshirt

[woodlandelf]

 
Title: Nightshirt
Night: 1 - Fire/Candles
Character: Mariemaia
Notes: It's not that great, but my fic writing gears are a little rusty! Inspiration from this item from The J. Peterman Company.
Disclaimer: Standard

Comments

[ederyn]

Ooooh, very well done, dude! Poor Mini Marshmallow! As you probably know, she's not my favorite character by a long shot, but you've made me really pity her here. I can so easily picture her hating herself for being the 'ugly redheaded stepchild' so to speak, when both her parents were so pretty and she looks like neither one of them. Especially when Dekim told her in the manga that she wasn't even related to them, and essentially disowned her entirely. You've done a good job here of getting inside her head and making the reader feel her pain, so Scooby snacks for you! *goes looking for the box*

[woodlandelf]

 
Thanks! She's far from my favorite, too, but when I tried to start writing, this is what came out.