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gwassh0ppa

The Lies We Tell (8/?)

Aug 21, 2010 15:52

The Lies We Tell 8/?
Pairing: None... yet
Rating: K+
Disclaimer: LTM, not mine. HT, mine.
Summary: When Zoe brings a new case and a new partner to the Lightman Group, long-buried truths will be revealed as they work to defend an innocent man, while a side investigation may place one partner in mortal peril.
A/N: No beta, all mistakes are mine. Going ( Read more... )

lie to me, cal/gillian

Comments 22

bsgroxmysox August 21 2010, 21:19:27 UTC

Ooh yay an update! Still loving this story and especially that little bit at the end with Emily's observations of Cal and Gillian. This and the new episode in 2 days! Wahoo!! :D
Great job :)

gwassh0ppa September 7 2010, 23:08:19 UTC

WHY DO I FORGET TO REPLY TO THESE? they make my day. OY.

I love Emily. LOVE HER. Thanks for the comment!

logicisfailing August 21 2010, 22:54:41 UTC

I adore long chapters, keep them coming!

Very nice job with the lust/longing when Cal arrived early to Gillian's. Ok, you know what? The whole chapter was excellent. I'm really enjoying this story - please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter :-)

gwassh0ppa September 7 2010, 23:09:11 UTC

Yay for long chapters. Bigger yay for another one!

Thanks for the comments, I'm trying to get the longing down with Cal, without it seeming over the top. Hard to do. THANKS!!!

Oh, next chap is up!

logicisfailing September 8 2010, 01:29:27 UTC

Well you accomplished it perfectly :-)

YAY for a new chapter!

lorenluvsjeff33 August 21 2010, 23:45:43 UTC

best semi-end to a day ever. <3 gah i loved this chapter with all the ~tension~ and omg, i just discovered nutella and its ridiculously good. so now i'm jealous of foster. :P can't wait for the next chapter!

gwassh0ppa September 7 2010, 23:10:02 UTC

:) Glad you loved the chap. And nutella. BEST THING EVER. I love it so. Thank you for commenting, I do enjoy them so! Next chap is up!

cosy_lil_corner August 22 2010, 04:58:53 UTC

Hey, I've been waiting for you to update especally since Mondays seem so far away these days. Love their banter, love the tension. This chapter definitely has it's moments.

gwassh0ppa September 7 2010, 23:10:49 UTC

I heart your icon. Perfect.
This was supposed to come out yesterday, but I had LIFE. whoops. Glad you love the tension and banter. I enjoy it so. Thanks for commenting! Next chap is up!

crumpled_up August 22 2010, 05:32:59 UTC

You made Gillian Foster play the piano. You just stole my heart. That's it. I'm done. I'm head over heels in love with this fic and your genius.

Never apologize for long chapters! That just makes them better!

And omg, do I love this chapter. It was one day of Cal and Gillian's lives and it was so awesome. The awkwardness at the beginning to the banter (and dessert! omg) to the promise. Yes. Then we've got Henri in between. LOVE IT. And Emily, of course. Love how she knows something is up with Cal as well and her observations. And I totally flailed when she said Gillian was one of her favorite people in the entire world.

she knew how to wield a frying pan. She'd be fine.
THIS LINE! YES! ♥

I can't wait to see how this plays out. I say that after every chapter, but it sounds like everything is kicking up a bit and I'm so excited.

GOOD LUCK ON YOUR EXAM! YOU WILL ROCK IT! AND I'LL BE CHEERING YOU ON. ♥

gwassh0ppa September 7 2010, 23:12:33 UTC

Dude. Have you seen her fingers, her hands?! They are made for the piano. So yes, she does.

I'm glad you love this chap, I kind of do too. All of it. I wanted the C/G because it's totally needed in all this. I hope Emily loves Gillian. At least likes her a lot. Better.

Ha. Foster and Frying pans are cannon now. Own it.

I can't wait to see how it plays out either ;) JK. Sorta.

Thanks for the luck. OH NEXT CHAP IS UP!!!