Waseda essay: take two!

[gweenmeanie]

Thank you everybody who helped fix the first draft of my essay! :o (Smooches to raitherai and omato for extensive raping. ♥) It's...really amazing how much crack I must've been smoking when I wrote it. So anyway, now you get to read through my

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[desertskiez]

I think you will be getting into that study abroad program :P. Just a few things

[gweenmeanie]

Thanks for your suggestions! :D A lot of them were very helpful and I managed to incorporate them into the final draft. Now hopefully I get accepted XO!!!

[desertskiez]

:P YAY!
And I added you as a friend, is that okie? :D

[raitherai]

"How about how it will change you as a person?" Tee hee I AGREE HANS AND HOPE YOU ADDED THAT IN.

It turned out really really nicely. Good luck on getting in, yo!