Comments | gwen_o_rama: Hello, Dean? You're a stupid-head!!!!

gwen_o_rama

Hello, Dean? You're a stupid-head!!!!

Nov 14, 2006 19:12

Homer, is that you?

aaaaaah!

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I have access to a lot of rage, it would seem.

I think my head caught on fire when I got a call today saying the my little ones hadn't remembered to bake off the pate last night. I had considered leaving a note for them, detailing times and temperatures, but decided to give them some ( Read more... )

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klausfiend November 15 2006, 01:34:38 UTC

Are you addicted to rage-o-hol?

gwen_o_rama November 15 2006, 02:43:48 UTC

why do you keep asking me that question?

i_get_stabby November 15 2006, 03:34:12 UTC

Because you're punching the cat right now!

gwen_o_rama November 15 2006, 03:41:52 UTC

spies!

Attention, everyone: the punch has been spiked. i_get_stabby November 15 2006, 03:33:21 UTC

Very good honey. Clear, concise, angry but not so much so that it interferes with the message. Thumbs up to you, thumbs down to your school's completely unacceptable behaviour.

"We are not a demographic that has an excess of time or money to waste."

Inherent

Re: Attention, everyone: the punch has been spiked. gwen_o_rama November 15 2006, 18:24:34 UTC

Thank you spelling police.

I'll send it this week. I want answers, dammit. ANSWERS!!

swirlingchaos November 15 2006, 20:33:45 UTC

Sounds good Gwen. I have a few tiny suggestions for a few spots that read a bit awkwardly, but take it or leave it, its pretty damn good as is. I'm really nitpicking, but thats what you wanted right?

i would change "...furious that these events have led me to misguide my bosses as to...."

to something like "...furious that these events have caused me to mislead my employers as to...

and maybe change "I have upheld my responsibilities as a student and feel very strongly that George Brown College has not upheld the responsibilities inherint in an educational institution"

to "I have upheld my responsibilities as a student and feel very strongly that George Brown College has not responded in turn by upholding the responsibilities expected in an educational institution of this caliber."

gwen_o_rama November 16 2006, 15:57:33 UTC

Thanks.

I'm in town tonight. You around?

swirlingchaos November 16 2006, 20:45:59 UTC

yep. i'll be at the stone around 10:30 or so after jitsu if you feel like dropping by.