I did that Harry Potter survey thing below in your journal and I got some weird brunette guy, we had sex 38 times, we were together for four years and I was killed by Usher. Charmed.
This story is sad :(. I can relate to her though! Fo' sure! We all know how ignored I was.
A stream of soft morning light peeked its way in through a slight crack between my heavy curtains and it began to flirt with my eyelids.That's a wonderful way to describe the effect light has on the eyelids and a person's consiousness. I've always had difficulty describing a waking-up scene, but that was very well done. Surprisingly well done. And since it's your opening sentence...you're bound to draw readers in
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Thanks for replying. I like your ideas.. I was planning on working that in somehow but I wasn't quite sure how. I think I have a better idea about it now. YOU ROCK! thanks for helping me out. Oh and thanks for liking my first sentence, I quite liked it too! hehe
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This story is sad :(. I can relate to her though! Fo' sure! We all know how ignored I was.
A stream of soft morning light peeked its way in through a slight crack between my heavy curtains and it began to flirt with my eyelids.That's a wonderful way to describe the effect light has on the eyelids and a person's consiousness. I've always had difficulty describing a waking-up scene, but that was very well done. Surprisingly well done. And since it's your opening sentence...you're bound to draw readers in ( ... )
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Oh and thanks for liking my first sentence, I quite liked it too! hehe
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