'Phase Transition' for kristenell

May 08, 2012 10:14

Title: Phase Transition
Recipient: kristenell
Rating: T
Warnings: Possible spoilers for Frozen Teardrop. Laughable knowledge of astronomy.
Summary: Life goes on. Until it doesn't.
Author's Notes: Well, I tried to keep it angst-free, but it seemed to have crept in somehow. I wrote this mainly to explore certain circumstances that occurred in Frozen Teardrop ( Read more... )

author: grandlarseny, character: heero yuy, round 2, pairing: heero yuy/relena darlian, character: relena darlian, character: dorothy catalonia, rating: t

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monalisaofpasta May 8 2012, 19:43:04 UTC
Thank you for the fic, it was very well written.

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monalisaofpasta May 9 2012, 02:49:22 UTC
Rereading it, I will add that I really like the parts in the beginning and the references to things that happened in the beginning of the series, particularly her talking about the dresses. (And thank you for referring to the fact that Relena probably doesn't view her time as Queen of the World that fondly).

I admit most of the FT stuff flows over my head as I am pretty much one of those people who pretends it doesn't exist. But your use of words was lovely.

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dictator_duck May 9 2012, 02:25:17 UTC
tnio;er'kntutjomew;g tjtr

I don't even 'ship these kids (though I love them both <3) or like Frozen Teardrop, and I just. FEELINGS. WHAT ARE THESE FEELINGS.

(seriously, this fic made me shiver. CHILDREN PLEASE GET THERAPISTS.

AND TRY NOT TO DIE.)

And. You use words really well? *flails*

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