'Enveloping' for grandlarseny

May 10, 2012 19:24

Title: Enveloping
Recipient: grandlarseny
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: Catherine's doubts lurk in the back of her mind and in the bottom of her kitchen cabinet. Meanwhile, Trowa has some news to give her.
Author: tealrose39

Enveloping )

author: tealrose39, character: catherine bloom, round 2, character: trowa barton, character: duo maxwell, rating: t

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lil_1337 May 11 2012, 04:31:09 UTC
That was a really interesting set up. Cathy felt very in character as did Trowa. The relationship between the two of them has always felt like siblings and this fic captures that well.

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tealrose39 June 3 2012, 14:44:22 UTC
Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked the characterization!

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teagoblin May 12 2012, 00:05:57 UTC
This was great, I like all the insights into the other pilots slipped in and I adore cathy and how human her fears are. I also really love the setup of the world that's hinted at

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tealrose39 June 3 2012, 14:45:42 UTC
Thanks, I've always been fond of Cathy as someone with her feet on the ground. And I'm glad that the outside world worked for story.

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ellebefore_emm May 16 2012, 16:53:42 UTC
I love the idea of Catherine as an idle collector of things. I really like that she felt guilty about getting the test done without his permission and the way that she handled it -- storing it somewhere that she didn't look often to avoid both the guilt and the temptation. There's so much room for a more intricate story here, but the snapshot that we get works well. :D

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tealrose39 June 3 2012, 14:49:19 UTC
Thanks, haha, I thought she'd like the variety. Yeah, I was afraid to be walking on the edge of an angstfest, glad the story ended up working out for you ^^

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