'Gravity' for lil_1337

May 12, 2012 22:01

Title: Gravity
Recipient: lil_1337
Rating: G
Warnings: Post-EW
Summary: Trowa and Quatre head home.
Author's Notes: I tried to combine introspective+romance from the prompt for this one.
Author: scacao

Gravity )

character: catherine bloom, pairing: quatre winner/trowa barton, round 2, author: scacao, character: trowa barton, character: quatre winner, rating: t

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darthanne May 13 2012, 07:00:56 UTC
Nice. I like the introspection and the way you write their relationship.

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scacao May 20 2012, 22:41:45 UTC
Thank you! I'm getting better at this pairing the more I write them...

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lil_1337 May 13 2012, 12:17:12 UTC
I really enjoyed this fic. It had the strong Trowa and Quatre that I love so much. You did a great job of getting into Trowa's head and showing what he is thinking. The end made me laugh because that's Trowa for you, a man of action. There is so much symbolism and levels of meaning in homecoming and you showed it subtle ways. I also really liked the way it is clear that Trowa and Quatre are friends with the other pilots. Seeing them all as friends always makes me happy.

Thank you so much for writing this. It made my day.

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scacao May 20 2012, 22:42:37 UTC
Thank you for the prompt! I'm so glad you liked it :D

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cailamaia May 14 2012, 17:41:20 UTC
I really enjoyed this. It seems somehow appropriate that they would rejoin the others this way. And the interaction is great. I loved Quatre's reaction to Trowa's suggestion. :D

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scacao May 20 2012, 22:43:41 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked the interaction, dialogue is my favorite part of writing :)

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winner_corp May 15 2012, 02:42:28 UTC
This story was so sweet! I loved Trowa's introspection about his past life as Triton and his current one as Trowa. It was nice to see Quatre and Trowa acting so comfortably around each other.

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scacao May 20 2012, 22:45:04 UTC
Thank you! I am always interested in writing how the pilots deal with their pasts. In this case, it was a past that never really happened...

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tyreling May 15 2012, 06:42:10 UTC
This is really nice. <3 Love everything about this.

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scacao May 20 2012, 22:45:11 UTC
Thank you!!

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