'A Few Days of Enforced Relaxation' for lil_1337

May 11, 2011 10:42

Title: A Few Days of Enforced Relaxation
Recipient: lil_1337
Rating: PG/PG-13 (kissing, limited make outs)
Warnings: None applicable
Summary: Quatre is forced to take a vacation; thankfully, Trowa is willing to take it with him. A fluffy plotless 3x4x3, third person but primarily Quatre perspective. May contain sparkles.
Author's Notes: Hi! I tried to ( Read more... )

pairing: quatre winner/trowa barton, author: dictator_duck, round 1, character: trowa barton, character: quatre winner, rating: t

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genarti May 11 2011, 14:08:22 UTC
This is leisurely, domestic, and entirely adorable. Well done!

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dictator_duck May 28 2011, 10:02:18 UTC
:DDDDD thank you for making me not scrap it and start over <333. (Note to other people as I cannot edit the main post: the anonymous beta is UNVEILED. Thanks Gen <3)

MY ONLY HUG ICON IS SAD SO HERE IS A HAPPY FACE INSTEAD.

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lil_1337 May 11 2011, 23:50:22 UTC
This was perfect!

The comfortable familiarity between Quatre and Trowa nailed exactly what it feels like to be a long term relationship with someone you are deeply in love with. They are in tune with each other and yet still very much their own people.

The descriptions of the hotel and the activities they were doing made me feel like I was there with them taking a mini vacation in my head.

Thank you so much for this, it absolutely made my day.

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dictator_duck May 28 2011, 10:03:18 UTC
Aaaah I am so glad you liked it! \o/. I felt bad not being able to be plotty, so I'm really glad the fluff worked for you <33! Thanks for the chance to write it :).

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darthanne May 12 2011, 00:35:49 UTC
I enjoyed this. I've felt the need for a while for a nice comfortable Quatre/Trowa fic, with a touch of romance and slice of life. This was perfect :)

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dictator_duck May 28 2011, 10:05:10 UTC
I am really glad it worked for you :D! I have a weakness for comfortable fics, I cannot lie. Thanks!

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cailamaia May 12 2011, 01:11:00 UTC
Beautifully done. The scenes were so detailed, it was almost like being there. I could almost feel the wind and hear the waves. :D And the interaction between the two of them... perfect. It's so. Balanced.

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dictator_duck May 28 2011, 10:07:23 UTC
I am so glad you liked it! And yeah, my personal view of their relationship is that they are both bossy mcbossersons who have very different but compatible styles of getting their own way >.>. (Thankfully their goals tend to be similar!)

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scacao May 12 2011, 03:12:55 UTC
I really loved this. Perfect characterization of Quatre :-D

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dictator_duck May 28 2011, 10:08:31 UTC
Ee! I am so glad you say so, because you are one of the few authors on here who I know wrote which fic for this exchange (that sentence is not grammatically correct, but I hope it makes sense) and I love YOUR characterization. :D!!! Thank you!

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scacao May 28 2011, 13:08:45 UTC
Haha that makes me wonder how obvious my writing style is O_o But thanks!

VVV First Night is definitely well within PG to PG-13 limits :)

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dictator_duck May 29 2011, 01:16:02 UTC
It's actually because you replied to my comment on The Hurricane and then deleted it when you realized we were still being anonymous! I haven't read any of your other fics, I will have to be sleuth-y later :). So don't worry!

Also, sweet!!

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