'First Night' for valenstyne

May 15, 2011 12:15

Title: First Night
Recipient: valenstyne
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: yaoi, the world's lightest lime
Summary: Trowa's first night sharing a bed with someone else.
Author's Notes: You wanted fluffy 3x4, you got fluffy 3x4 <3
Author: scacao

First Night )

pairing: quatre winner/trowa barton, round 1, author: scacao, character: trowa barton, character: quatre winner, rating: t

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lil_1337 May 15 2011, 19:36:50 UTC
This was wonderful! I loved the way the touching and tasting each other intermingled with moments of pure joy and discovery. You did a great job of showing how they fit together as people and how solid the relationship is.

Thanks for starting my day off with a smile.

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scacao May 28 2011, 13:18:53 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it :D Very apt icon, haha.

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scacao May 28 2011, 13:19:44 UTC
Yay! Thank you. I'm glad it wasn't too massively sappy. I tried to steer away from that but sometimes I'm afraid I overdo it *_*

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cailamaia May 15 2011, 20:39:27 UTC
That was a perfect balance between sap and actual meaningful stuff. :D Brilliantly done. I love it.

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scacao May 28 2011, 13:24:29 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad I managed the balance, LMAO. Sometimes I'm not so sure...

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dentelle_noir May 15 2011, 22:31:53 UTC
That last line of Trowa? "He felt himself succumb for good" Oh, it was PERFECT! And brilliantly put! Lovely work!

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scacao May 28 2011, 13:21:46 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

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valenstyne May 16 2011, 10:49:04 UTC
Eeeeee, this is perfect! Thank you SO MUCH. It's exactly what I wanted! I would quote my favorite lines, but I love the whole thing--it's so sweet and gentle and absolutely them. <33333

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scacao May 28 2011, 13:23:45 UTC
Yay!! You're welcome. And thanks for the prompt, it gave me the opportunity to work on my 3x4 chops :D I'm just glad you actually liked it!!

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