'Pause (constellations and the echoes of gunfire)' for bloody_winged

May 23, 2011 23:09

Title: Pause (constellations and the echoes of gunfire)
Recipient: bloody_winged
Rating: T
Warnings: None.
Summary: Heero searches for answers and finds them in unlikely places.
Author's Notes: I hope you enjoy this, even though it might not be what you were expecting.
Author: liafic

Pause (constellations and the echoes of gunfire) )

author: liafic, character: heero yuy, round 1, character: duo maxwell, character: relena darlian, rating: t

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lil_1337 May 24 2011, 06:21:36 UTC
That was intense and heart breaking though the ending gives a glimmer of hope that Heero will find what he is looking for.

I loved the line about staggering under the absence of weight.

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liafic May 29 2011, 03:38:22 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you feel the ending was hopeful; I feel like these characters have so much to work through after the war, and maybe they need to rely on each other in order to find themselves.

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dictator_duck May 24 2011, 07:13:38 UTC
Oh, Heero.

I don't have much to say beyond that, but oh this tugs my heartstrings ):. Poor, messed up boy, looking for a mission directive even if he knows better than to cast it in those terms. I'm glad he has a good friend like Duo. But oh, Heero.

(I feel bad for Relena, too; I suspect she wants to be a friend, wants to have a friend -- she doesn't want to be the one who gives Heero purpose. What a hard thing to expect of someone!)

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liafic May 29 2011, 03:46:18 UTC
Thank you! ♥

I see so much of a mirror image between Heero and Relena. They both try to draw their strength from one another, and although Relena managed to find her own meaning eventually, I feel like Heero would be at a bit of a loss after the war.

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bloody_winged May 24 2011, 08:57:06 UTC
Thank you! :D
I admit, this wasn't what I expected, but it was lovely :) It gives me hope that the three of them will all find what they are searching. The war left them all confused, but they still have each other :) I hope for them that one day they will all find their way to each other and to find their own peace :)

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liafic May 29 2011, 04:11:17 UTC
Thank you!

I think these three will always be part of one another's lives.

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