Into Eternity; Pudd Standalone

[gymkhanajunkie]

Into Eternity
Author: Moi gymkhanajunkie
Rating: 15ish
Warnings: Angst, character death
Summary: I sit holding your hand. Your cold, lifeless fingers sting against my own warm ones
A/N: For some reason, all I can write is deathfics, and I can't stand them.

Comments

[lambofcurl101th]

Beautiful. I'm quite happy that you didn't write it as a completely angsty fic and that you reflected on the boys' love and good times, how carefree they were together, and Harry wasn't all ridiculous with grief and emo. Very well done. <3

I especially like Dougie having to stand on the curb to kiss Harry. Awww times a billion!

[gymkhanajunkie]

Thankyou!!
I'm glad you like it =]

[x_lu_galleta_x]

awww

this was so sad and SO beautiful.

I LOVE this bit: "I slip my hand out of yours after giving it a final squeeze, a whisper of promises and declarations of love are left floating in the gentle breeze drifting in from the window as your soul is carried away into eternity."

x

[gymkhanajunkie]

Eeh, thanks =]]
I'm happy you think that =D
<3

[loudcities]

So gorgeous and so beautiful.
The combination of flashbacks worked well and gave the fiction some light hearted humour which is always quite nice to see in death!fic.
I liked the dynamics between Harry and Dougie as well, you made them work
Just, yeah.
Loved it.
<3

[gymkhanajunkie]

Thankyou so much! <3
=D

[gymkhanajunkie]

Thanks! <3

[gymkhanajunkie]

oh && I lurrve your userpic =]

[puddlove182]

OMG!!!!
Thats amazing
Im nearly crying

[gymkhanajunkie]

aww, thankyou! <3
But don't cry =[